Chapter Thirty-One
'I'm as mad as hell, and I'm not gonna take this anymore- I'm moving to Hawaii.'
What's Changed
Why are you going to film through the keyhole more rather than over the bath?
As a team we feel the opening sequence will be more mysterious if we film though the keyhole from young Evangeline's perspective.
The final shot will be young Evangeline opening the bathroom door to see her mothers legs hanging out of the bath and it will cut to black very quickly.
Why change the death from drowning suicide to self harm (bleeding out) suicide?
It will make more sense and make it easier to film her dying above the water rather than drowning beneath the water.
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